Copyediting Ursaluna Wallbreaker (Normal) QC (2/2) GP (0/1)

Elvira

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[SET]
Ursaluna @ Flame Orb
name: Wallbreaker
Ability: Guts
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Facade
- Earthquake
- Drain Punch/ Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance Ursaluna is a powerful wallbreaker for Normal-type teams, as it's ability Guts paired with a Flame Orb make its already high attack go even higher. At +2, Facade is a move that, paired with Flame Orb along with a burn, can annihilate even the bulkiest of Pokemon such as Mandibuzz, Galarian Weezing, and Gliscor. After a boost, Earthquake breaks through Steel-type and Fire-type Pokemon such as Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, and Archaludon. Drain Punch is a great form of recovery that can provide a bit more longevity to Ursaluna with regen. Alternatively, Fire Punch can be used to immediately KO pokemon such as Corviknight, Skarmory, and Scizor. With 252 Speed, Ursaluna can outspeed Kingambit and Azumarill and hit them hard with STAB Earthquake or Facade.

Hisuian Zoroark is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna with its signature ability Illusion and Ghost-typing, baiting any Fighting-type moves in and hitting back or spreading status with Will-O-Wisp. Ursaluna can take advantage of Hisuian Zoroark's ability and hit the opponent with a powerful STAB move after Flame Orb activates. Hisuian Zoroark has the capability to pivot as well being disguised as Ursaluna. Blissey is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna as it can take damage from special attacking Pokemon such as Latios and use support moves like Thunder Wave or Stealth Rock. Also, Blissey can use Healing Wish to return Ursaluna back to full and activate Flame Orb again. Choice Scarf Indeedee can help remove Fighting-type pokemon such as non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, Zamazenta, and Great Tusk with terrain boosted Expanding Force. Terrain also prevents Kingambit and Chien-Pao from using priority moves like Sucker Punch or Ice Shard. Indeedee can also provide Healing Wish support for Ursaluna. Braviary is a bulky Flying-type that pairs well with Ursaluna as it can provide Defog support but also hit additional Fighting- and Grass- types such as Sneasler, Gallade, and the Ogerpon formes. Braviary also provides pivot with access to U-Turn, being able to switch out and allow Ursaluna come in and annihilate. Smeargle is also a great teammate for Ursaluna as its range of support moves like Sticky Web and Spore, lowering speed or putting a foe to sleep so Ursaluna can setup safely.

Other Options
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Trailblaze is another move that Ursaluna can use paired with Sticky Web, as the reduction in speed for the opponent can guarantee Ursaluna the ability to outspeed at +1 and hit hard.

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[SET]
Ursaluna @ Flame Orb
Ability: Guts
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Facade
- Earthquake
- Drain Punch/ Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance Ursaluna is a powerful wallbreaker for Normal-type teams, as it's ability Guts paired with a Flame Orb make its already high attack go even higher. Swords Dance gives Ursaluna the power boost to break down bulky Pokemon. At +2, Facade is a move that, paired with Flame Orb, annihilate 2KHO's even the bulkiest of pokemon such as Ting-Lu, Galarian Weezing Toxapex, and Gliscor. Earthquake is preferred over Headlong Rush due to the defense lowering debuff as well as not taking any unnecessary damage from Rocky Helmet or Rough Skin. After a boost, Earthquake breaks through Steel-type and Fire-type pokemon such as Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Archaludon, and Gouging Fire. Drain Punch is a great form of recovery while also hitting Dark-type pokemon like Kingambit, Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Alternatively, Fire Punch can be used to threaten pokemon such as Corviknight, Skarmory, and Scizor. With 252 Speed, Ursaluna can outspeed Kingambit, Azumarill, and Archaludon and hit them hard with STAB Earthquake or Facade. [Overall I love it, but since this is a SD set, talk about what it takes out at +2 so what does facade, eq, drain punch/fire punch takes out at +2 :D]

Hisuian Zoroark is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna with its signature ability Illusion and Ghost-typing, baiting any Fighting-type moves in and hitting back or spreading status with Will-O-Wisp. Ursaluna can take advantage of Hisuian Zoroark's ability and hit the opponent with a powerful STAB move after Flame Orb activates. Blissey is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna as it can take any to all special attacking moves and return with Seismic Toss or status like Thunder Wave. Also, Blissey can use Healing Wish to return Ursaluna back to full and activate Flame Orb again. Choice Scarf Indeedee can help remove Fighting-type pokemon such as non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, Zamazenta, and Great Tusk with terrain Psychic Terrain boosted Expanding Force Psychic or Psyshock. Alternatively, Indeedee can also provide Healing Wish support for Ursaluna. Braviary is a bulky Flying-type that pairs well with Ursaluna as it can provide Defog support but also hit additional Fighting- and Grass- types such asand Sneasler, Gallade, and the Ogerpon formes Ogerpon-Hearthflame or Ogerpon-Wellspring. [You can also mention it providing pivoting for the bear via U-turn.]
- Add Smeargle as a teammate option: great support mon for the bear.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Ursaluna can utilize other forms of coverage such as Thunder Punch for Flying-types like Articuno or Enamorus, Ice Punch for Dragon-type pokemon such as Garchomp or Hydrapple, Trailblaze to not only hit Water- and Ground-types but also raise its Speed, Taunt to stop any forms of hazard setup, and Throat Chop to hit Ghost-types like Brambleghast or Spectrier.

we honestly do not want to swap out any of our moves due its key coverage. Plus we just flat out nuke things with our main moves.


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will take a look after these implements, ty >:)
 

Elvira

formerly bruised
[SET]
Ursaluna @ Flame Orb
Ability: Guts
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Facade
- Earthquake
- Drain Punch/ Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance Ursaluna is a powerful wallbreaker for Normal-type teams, as it's ability Guts paired with a Flame Orb make its already high attack go even higher. At +2, Facade is a move that, paired with Flame Orb, annihilate even the bulkiest of pokemon such as Ting-Lu, Galarian Weezing, and Gliscor. Earthquake is preferred over Headlong Rush due to the defense lowering debuff as well as not taking any unnecessary damage from Rocky Helmet or Rough Skin. After a boost, Earthquake breaks through Steel-type and Fire-type pokemon such as Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Archaludon, and Gouging Fire. Drain Punch is a great form of recovery while also hitting Dark-type pokemon like Kingambit, Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Alternatively, Fire Punch can be used to threaten pokemon such as Corviknight, Skarmory, and Scizor. With 252 Speed, Ursaluna can outspeed Kingambit, Azumarill, and Archaludon and hit them hard with STAB Earthquake or Facade.

Hisuian Zoroark is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna with its signature ability Illusion and Ghost-typing, baiting any Fighting-type moves in and hitting back or spreading status with Will-O-Wisp. Ursaluna can take advantage of Hisuian Zoroark's ability and hit the opponent with a powerful STAB move after Flame Orb activates. Blissey is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna as it can take any to all special attacking moves and return with Seismic Toss or status like Thunder Wave. Also, Blissey can use Healing Wish to return Ursaluna back to full and activate Flame Orb again. Choice Scarf Indeedee can help remove Fighting-type pokemon such as non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, Zamazenta, and Great Tusk with terrain boosted Expanding Force. Alternatively, Indeedee can also provide Healing Wish support for Ursaluna. Braviary is a bulky Flying-type that pairs well with Ursaluna as it can provide Defog support but also hit additional Fighting- and Grass- types such as Sneasler, Gallade, and the Ogerpon formes. Braviary also provides pivot with access to U-Turn, being able to switch out and allow Ursaluna come in and annihlate. Smeargle is also a great teammate for Ursaluna as its range of support moves like Sticky Webs and Healing Wish that greatly assist in lowering the opponent's speed or recovering Ursaluna back to full.


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will take a look after these implements, ty >:)
Implimented :3
 

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Smeargle is also a great teammate for Ursaluna as its range of support moves like Sticky Web, Healing Wish, and Spore greatly assist in lowering speed or recovering Ursaluna back to full.
take out h wish and just keep s web and spore, greatly assisting in lowering speed or putting a foe to sleep so ursaluna can set up safer.
QC 1/2 well done!
 

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[SET]
Ursaluna @ Flame Orb
name: Wallbreaker
Ability: Guts
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Facade
- Earthquake
- Drain Punch / Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance Ursaluna is a powerful wallbreaker for Normal-type teams, as it's ability Guts paired with a Flame Orb make its already high attack go even higher. At +2, Facade is a move that, paired with Flame Orb (after its burned over paired with a flame orb?), annihilate even the bulkiest of pPokemon such as Ting-Lu (ting usually isnt Def, so something "better" could be mandibuzz, Physdef Great Tusk [amazing]), Galarian Weezing, and Gliscor. Earthquake is preferred over Headlong Rush due to the defense lowering debuff as well as not taking any unnecessary damage from Rocky Helmet or Rough Skin. (Headlong isnt mentioned anywhere, so I think you dont need to mention that) After a boost, Earthquake breaks through Steel-type and Fire-type pPokemon such as Gholdengo, non-Air Balloon Heatran, Archaludon, and Gouging Fire (already popped by Facade). Drain Punch is a great form of recovery while also hitting Dark-type pokemon like Kingambit, Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon (unneeded, you technically hit these with your first 2 moves and its really just for recovery). Alternatively, Fire Punch can be used to threaten (immediately OHKO after SR? Facade deals ~70 to P.Def Skarm so you already threaten it, but Fire Punch claims the OHKO immediately, preventing them from stalling you) pokemon such as Corviknight, Skarmory, and Scizor. With 252 Speed, Ursaluna can outspeed Kingambit, Azumarill, and Archaludon (currently flagged at 219 speed in analyses to prevent this) and hit them hard with STAB Earthquake or Facade.

Hisuian Zoroark is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna with its signature ability Illusion and Ghost-typing, baiting any Fighting-type moves in and hitting back or spreading status with Will-O-Wisp. Ursaluna can take advantage of Hisuian Zoroark's ability and hit the opponent with a powerful STAB move after Flame Orb activates (Horo can also pivot, which is pretty nice). Blissey is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna as it can take any to all special attacking moves (maybe actual attackers like Latios would be nice) and return with Seismic Toss or status like Thunder Wave (it also crucially has Rocks which lets Luna OHKO Skarm with Punchy). Also, Blissey can use Healing Wish to return Ursaluna back to full and activate Flame Orb again. Choice Scarf Indeedee can help remove Fighting-type pokemon such as non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, Zamazenta, and Great Tusk with terrain boosted Expanding Force. Alternatively (its not Alternatively since I think this should be the same scarf indeed? Its not a diff set. also this prevents Kingambit or Pao (soon to be axed) from killing it with prio), Indeedee can also provide Healing Wish support for Ursaluna. Braviary is a bulky Flying-type that pairs well with Ursaluna as it can provide Defog support but also hit additional Fighting- and Grass- types such as Sneasler, Gallade, and the Ogerpon formes. Braviary also provides pivot with access to U-Turn, being able to switch out and allow Ursaluna come in and annihilate. Smeargle is also a great teammate for Ursaluna as its range of support moves like Sticky Web and Spore, lowering speed or putting a foe to sleep so Ursaluna can setup safely.

Add other options
-Trailblaze is especially cool if you're using webs, since you have a legitimate chance to outspeed the opposing team when you're +1 (and they're -1)



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QC 2/2, thankie Elvira
 

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Ping me when implemented and I'll give the stamp, you left out a necessary connection/explanation that I can't fill in (how Ursaluna takes advantage of H-Zark's ability- I assume it's something to do with making the opp nervous to make plays?).
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[SET]
Ursaluna @ Flame Orb
name: Wallbreaker
Ability: Guts
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Facade
- Earthquake
- Drain Punch/ Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance Ursaluna is a powerful wallbreaker for Normal-type (not incorrect but ffr you can just say "Normal teams" and such in mono analyses) teams, as its (RA) ability Guts paired with a Flame Orb make makes its already-high (AH) attack Attack go even higher. At +2 with a burn from Flame Orb, Facade is a move that, paired with Flame Orb along with a burn, (filler + awk) can annihilate even the bulkiest of Pokemon such as Mandibuzz, Galarian Weezing, and Gliscor. After a boost, Earthquake breaks through Steel-type and Fire-type Pokemon such as Gholdengo, Archaludon, and non-Air Balloon Heatran, and Archaludon (list ordering). Drain Punch is a great form of recovery that can provide a bit more longevity to Ursaluna with regen. Alternatively, Fire Punch can be used to immediately KO pokemon Pokemon such as Corviknight, Skarmory, and Scizor. With 252 Speed EVs, Ursaluna can outspeed Kingambit and Azumarill and hit them hard with STAB Earthquake or Facade.

Hisuian Zoroark is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna with its signature ability Illusion and Ghost typing (RH), baiting any Fighting-type moves in and hitting back or spreading status with Will-O-Wisp. Ursaluna can take advantage of Hisuian Zoroark's ability (how? elaborate, connection isn't obvious) and hit the opponent foe with a powerful STAB move after Flame Orb activates. Hisuian Zoroark has the capability to pivot as well being when disguised as Ursaluna. Blissey is an excellent teammate to pair with Ursaluna, (AC) as it can take damage from special attacking Pokemon attackers such as Latios and use support moves like Thunder Wave or and Stealth Rock. Also, Blissey can use Healing Wish to return Ursaluna back to full health and activate Flame Orb again. Choice Scarf Indeedee can help remove Fighting-type pokemon Pokemon such as non-Choice Scarf Iron Valiant, Zamazenta, and Great Tusk with terrain boosted Terrain-boosted Expanding Force, Terrain also prevents prevent Kingambit and Chien-Pao from using priority moves like Sucker Punch or and Ice Shard with Psychic Terrain, and (period > comma) Indeedee can also provide Healing Wish support for Ursaluna (merged these 3 sentences due to same topic and similar structure). Braviary is a bulky Flying-type that pairs well with Ursaluna, (AC) as it can provide Defog support but also and (doesn't contrast) hit additional Fighting- and Grass-types (removed space) such as Sneasler, Gallade, and the Ogerpon formes. Braviary It also provides pivot pivoting with access to U-Turn U-turn, being able to switch switching out and allow allowing Ursaluna to come in and annihilate. Smeargle is also a great teammate for Ursaluna, (AC) as its range of support moves like Sticky Web and Spore (RC) lowering speed or putting a foe can lower a foe's Speed or put it to sleep so Ursaluna can setup set up safely.

Other Options
=============
Ursaluna can use Trailblaze is another move that Ursaluna can use when (filler) paired with Sticky Web, as the reduction in speed for the opponent foe's Speed reduction can guarantee Ursaluna the ability to outspeed it at +1 and hit hard.

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