ORAS NU Rate my Unthodoxs team

[Corie]

First of all sorry for the unwelcoming rate... Im just learning how to set evertyhing up...





Hit em up (Primeape) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Vital Spirit
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Stone Edge
- Close Combat
- U-turn
- Poison Jab



Taur Taur (Tauros) @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Iron Head
- Zen Headbutt
- Return
- Earthquake

Lanturn @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
Happiness: 254
EVs: 252 HP / 220 Def / 208 SpD / 40 Speed
Calm Nature
- Scald
- Discharge
- Toxic
- Protect



Magmortar @ Wise Glasses
Ability: Vital Spirit
EVs: 248 HP / 252 SpA / 8 SpD
Modest Nature
- Lava Plume
- Psychic
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Ice]

Mawile @ Air Balloon
Ability: Intimidate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Iron Head
- Knock Off
- Play Rough
- Stealth Rock

Cacturne @ Wide Lens
Ability: Water Absorb
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 248 HP / 252 SpA / 8 SpD
Modest Nature
- Dark Pulse
- Spiky Shield
- Giga Drain
- Focus Blast

 

[Oshony PokeGod]

Bro you need to add descriptions (and some pictures would be nice too), when you are putting in a pastebin, put the RAW Paste Data into an importable.

While we are here, i dont know why you are using protect lanturn, and not scald on defensive (evs are also a little off).

Crunch on mawile is unnecessary, use baton pass instead. Fire blast > lava plume on magmortar, unless ur using av and afraid of fire blast misses. acturne needs speed, not bulk, and dont use LO DE tauros pls, thats just killing itself in about 2 turns.

 

[IronBullet]

Hi there, you need to provide in-depth descriptions for each Pokemon to explain your choices and their roles as required by the RMT rules. Please read the rules carefully and take a look at other RMTs and the RMT archive to see the kind of detail and format we require before posting a thread here. PM me with updated descriptions once you review the rules and I'll reopen this thread.