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- I'd also note that instead of changing a letter in the middle of the word, it's usually clearer for the writer to just rewrite the word so the change is more visible.
iese," so try to focus on making your checks as readable for a writer as possible, as te=hey are the ones who have to implement your changes.
- It should be STAB combination not combinations because there is one combination of its STAB moves (the combination of Grass + Dark)
- You're right that good isn't correct, but you could change it to something like "complements these moves well" to avoid removing the information that it's a good option. GP should always avoid removing content and changing meanings because those meanings have been quality checked.
- The change in this sentence is also somewhat unneccesary, as the original is still fine and grammatically correct.
Light Sanctity
- Not sure why you added a comma here, you don't need one before allow.
- In articles, and not analyses, Pokemon with the accent is fine. Ina n analysis, you should always change it, but this was an article extract, so keeping it is fine.The new pool of PokèemonkKalos introducedweren'twasn't as hyped-up as previous ones, as it was very small compared to the batches ofmonsPokemon other regions introduced.
- I'd also note that instead of changing a letter in the middle of the word, it's usually clearer for the writer to just rewrite the word so the change is more visible.
- Here, you should mark on comma additions / removals with AC and RC. Just the punctuation with a different colour is really hard for a writer to see, so they may miss it while implementing. Something like "like I said, (AC)" makes it a lot more visible for the writer.but,like I said,
- Don't refer to Pokemon as who because they're not people; use which or that.Pokéemon who
- Changes like this are also kinda hard to read imo because you're only striking out half the word, and when it stops might not be super visible to everyone. Rewriting could make it a lot more easier for a writer to notice. I notice other parts of this check like this, like "thleaded
- You're correct in removing the hyphen, but it's also not super clear so you coukd makr it on using AH or just rewriting the phrase, and even if it is seen, there was no space added so it might get mistakenly implemented as MegaEvolution.Mega-Evolution
- Use formes when referring to different in battle formes like Mega Evolutions and stuff like Rotom formes.powerful forms.
This doesn't need to be hyphenated because the adverb ends in -ly so ti describes the designs. Stuff like defensively oriented also follow this rule.amazingly-designed
- The original structure was fine here imo, so this change was an unnecessary subjective change. In GP, we want to avoid unneccessary subjective changes because we want to preserve the original analysis and writer's voice as much as possible because it's their analysis, and if we change too much, we can lose their writing style. For now, just try to focus on objective things in analyses to get a better grip of the standards, then it becomes easier with experience to know what a subjective change improves readability and improves the analysis, whcih is the only times they should be made.NU.;Oonly
- It should be "resist or are immune to" because it's referring to two Pokemon (Skuntank and Miltank) so it's plural.Skuntank and Sap Sipper Miltank resists orareis immune to Decidueye's STAB combinations
- It should be STAB combination not combinations because there is one combination of its STAB moves (the combination of Grass + Dark)
- When listing multiple types, use a hyphen after all of them. Steel- and Poison-types is correct.Steel and Poison-types
- Smogon uses the serial/Oxford comma *comma before and in a list fo 3 or more), so you would need to add a comma after Ferroseed.Silvally-Steel, Ferroseed and Gardobor
- It should be complements not compliments because compliments refers to complimenting someone / saying good things about them.Hurricane compliments these two movesgood,
- You're right that good isn't correct, but you could change it to something like "complements these moves well" to avoid removing the information that it's a good option. GP should always avoid removing content and changing meanings because those meanings have been quality checked.
- U-turn not U-Turn.U-Turn
- Don't use abuse in analyses because of the negative connotations, so something like "take advantage of" is better.abuse
- The change in this sentence is also somewhat unneccesary, as the original is still fine and grammatically correct.
Light Sanctity
- It should be helps not help here because the sentence is singular, referring to just Milotic.Its naturally high Special Defense help
- You removed information here by removing its typing. GP should never remove or change content because the content was approved or added by QC. GP doesn't have that metagame knowledge, so removing approved content can lead to changing the meanings to what QC didn't want.and its typing and decent Def Defense, (AC) allow it to tank hits from Pokemon like Dracovish.
- Not sure why you added a comma here, you don't need one before allow.
- It should be and here because Pokemon is plural. x or y is singular, and x and y is plural.Pokemon like Dracovish, Dragapult, (AC) or Hydreigon.
- Kommo-o not Kommo-O.Kommo-O