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- Commas are used before "which" clauses.
- "You" refers to the human battler and not your Pokemon. This could be rephrased to say "Rough Skin, which damages the opposing Pokemon when it makes contact with Garchomp," also removing the ambiguity with the "it"
- Switch-in is a noun, which is used to say "switch-ins to x Pokemon" or similar; switch in (without the hyphen) is the verb.
- Commas are used before *since" and "as" if they mean because.
- Effect here should be replaced with affect here. Affect means to influence or to produce a change in something, and effect is a noun, and it means the result of a change.
- Commas are used before "but" and "and" if both clauses are independent (make sense on their own). Both of these do, so a comma should be added.
- "Weary" means tired; the word should be wary.
- Stealth Rock, not Stealth Rocks.
- Good change with opponent, because opponent = the human battler. "The opponent's team when they switch" does sound a little off now, however.
- In to -> into.
- Set names and playstyles aren't capitalised, so it would be a "defensive" set.
- Adding that extra information is a content change, and it was nowhere in the original. We don't make quakity changes, and if one is really needed, leave a comment instead of a change.
- Utilize, not utilise; Smogon uses American English.
- Commas are used before "so" unless it means "so that," so the comma isn't needed.
- OHKOs is the noun, and OHKOes is the verb. It OHKOes Heatran.
- I would use Pokemon over things for more formality.
Overall, a great first check! I'm going to copy the other two and show how I would've checked this.
- When referring to dual typings, they are spaced out like Dragon / Ground typing. A hyphen is never used with the word "typing." Dragon is also the primary type.Garchomp has a really good Ground/Dragon-typing and the ability Rough Skin which allowsit tothe opposing Pokemon to take damageyouwhen you make contact with it.
- Commas are used before "which" clauses.
- "You" refers to the human battler and not your Pokemon. This could be rephrased to say "Rough Skin, which damages the opposing Pokemon when it makes contact with Garchomp," also removing the ambiguity with the "it"
- Good change from Fairies to Fairy-typesFairiesFairy-types can switch-in to Garchomp since Outrage doesn't effect them but they must be weary of Earthquake.
- Switch-in is a noun, which is used to say "switch-ins to x Pokemon" or similar; switch in (without the hyphen) is the verb.
- Commas are used before *since" and "as" if they mean because.
- Effect here should be replaced with affect here. Affect means to influence or to produce a change in something, and effect is a noun, and it means the result of a change.
- Commas are used before "but" and "and" if both clauses are independent (make sense on their own). Both of these do, so a comma should be added.
- "Weary" means tired; the word should be wary.
- "Setup" is a noun, so setup sweepers, setup moves; "set up" is the verb and what you're looking for here.Garchomp can also setup Stealth Rocks to weaken the opponent's team when they switch in to a different Pokemon.
- Stealth Rock, not Stealth Rocks.
- Good change with opponent, because opponent = the human battler. "The opponent's team when they switch" does sound a little off now, however.
- In to -> into.
- I would change the first "it" to Garchomp to make it clear what's being referred to.It can also run a Defensive set,(RC) with Rocky Helmet and Dragon Tail, (AC) and it can also utilise aZ-EarthquakeTectonic Rage set withSDSwords Dance and anaAdamantNnature, so that it OHKOs things like Heatran.
- Set names and playstyles aren't capitalised, so it would be a "defensive" set.
- Adding that extra information is a content change, and it was nowhere in the original. We don't make quakity changes, and if one is really needed, leave a comment instead of a change.
- Utilize, not utilise; Smogon uses American English.
- Commas are used before "so" unless it means "so that," so the comma isn't needed.
- OHKOs is the noun, and OHKOes is the verb. It OHKOes Heatran.
- I would use Pokemon over things for more formality.
Overall, a great first check! I'm going to copy the other two and show how I would've checked this.
Garchomp has a really good Ground/Dragon-typing Dragon / Ground typing and Rough Skin, (AC) which allows it to damage you when you the foe when it makes contact. Fairies Fairy-types can switch-in to switch into Garchomp, (AC) since Outrage doesn't effect affect them, (AC) but they must be weary wary of Earthquake. Garchomp can also set (space) up Stealth Rocks to weaken the opponent foes when they switch in. It can run a defensive set, (RC) and can also utilise utilize a Z-Earthquake Tectonic Rage set with Swords Dance and an Adamant nature, (RC) so that it OHKOes things Pokemon like Heatran.