Monotype Dragonite (Flying)

[Neko]

Dragonite @ Heavy-Duty Boots

Ability: Multiscale
EVs: 112 HP / 144 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- Dragon Dance
- Roost

The combination of Multiscale, Dragon Dance, and Roost makes Dragonite a threatening sweeper in the Electric, Fire, and Water matchups. Dragon Claw allows Dragonite to damage Pokemon such as Rotom-W and Pelipper while also being able to switch moves. Earthquake threatens Steel-, Electric-, and Poison-types such as Aegislash, Tapu Koko, and Toxapex. The combination of Dragon Dance and Roost allows Dragonite to set up multiple times on Pokemon that rely on chip damage to deal with it, such as Rotom-W, while also maximizing the utility of Multiscale. 144 Attack EVs let Dragonite OHKO SubRoost Kyurem with Dragon Claw after a Dragon Dance. Dragonite is unable to check defensive Pokemon such as Skarmory and Slowbro, so special attackers like Thundurus-T and Galarian Moltres make great teammates. Pokemon like Celesteela and Corviknight are appreciated to check Fairy-types such as Tapu Bulu and Tapu Fini.

Here is a replay of Dragonite showing off its bulky prowess to eventually win the Electric matchup: [Gen 8] Monotype: Dieu Amphibien vs. RindaOkami

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[Neko]

Ready for QC :D
I wanna make a tiny wings joke so bad but I dont know where to put it ;w;
If the replay is also too old I have this [Gen 8] Monotype: MLT7B1 SkyBully4 vs. MLT7B1 Neko where Dnite just wins the MU by spamming Roost/PP stalling Victini but Idk

 

[Neko]

roxiee Felines

 

[roxie]

I’d exclude Steel. The general presence of Ferrothorn +Leech plus Toxic/Leech + Slam Steela OR skarmory leaves the Steel mu more in the hands of Galarian Moltres/Zap. Poison can check this with Toxic Crobat & Galarian Weezing and it mainly makes progress late game and that’s dependent if the user is using A Nihilego variant which threatens flying. Just leave Fire Elec Water here.



Change fearsome to threatening.



Add some non-Electric targets that dclaw hits. Maybe rotom and a flying/water so it flows well with your type examples?



Replace ferro with a different steel type that isn’t neutral to eq



Change +1 to “after a Dragon Dance”, seems less lazy.



“The other EVs were invested in HP to make Dragonite as bulky as possible.” This feels implied as you’ve already stated the main purpose of the evs



Tapu bulu / fini should be listed in the examples it has a hard time with.



Dragonite is not the best in fairy or psychic and it’s not doing much even if just lele is removed tbh. Dnite is mainly just the fire resist for victini so remove this entire line regarding celesteela.

Steel in the examples for moltres

 

[roxie]

Also make a generalized line before you talk abt thundurus and moltres about them being effective against defensive pokemon. It’s nice to provide the reader actual examples of what pokemon they deal with and/or drafonite struggles with however it doesn’t need an emphasized mention since this is a spotlight. Something like “abc and yards deals with mega sableye with nasty plot for dnite”

 

[Neko]

Also make a generalized line before you talk abt thundurus and moltres about them being effective against defensive pokemon. It’s nice to provide the reader actual examples of what pokemon they deal with and/or drafonite struggles with however it doesn’t need an emphasized mention since this is a spotlight. Something like “abc and yards deals with mega sableye with nasty plot for dnite”

Btw edits done, um..can you check if I implemented it correctly (or anything more to add/remove?)

 

[roxie]

Remove “where the opponent cannot deal significant damage to it quickl”.

Barr askew da is not a Dclaw target in the group of Rotom. I meant Water types that aren’t bothered by eq similar to how you had electric types unbothered by eq. Replace barra with Pelipper.

remove ferrothorn in the setup fodder examples

Dragonite is unable to check defensive Pokemon such as Celesteela Skarmory and Slowbro so special attackers like Thundurus-T and Moltres-T make great teammates to handle them. Furthermore, and Pokemon like Celesteela and Corviknight are appreciated to check Fairy-types that naturally resist Dragonite's coverage, such as Tapu Bulu and Tapu Fini Pokemon such as Celesteela and Slowbro, and Pokemon that naturally resist Dragonite's coverage. such as Tapu Bulu and Tapu Fini, team mates that can deal with those Pokemon are good team mates. Thundurus-T and Galarian Moltres can deal with Celesteela and Slowbro, and improve Flying and Psychic matchups.rage. , team mates that can deal with those Pokemon are good team mates. Thundurus-T and Galarian Moltres can deal with Celesteela and Slowbro, and improve Flying and Psychic matchups.

 

[roxie]

I’m on break and I’m on mobile, Felines can you check on this after he implements

 

[roxie]

nvm just tag or pm me if you have any questions i got off early fish sticks cat.

edit: Ok you can move to gp

 

[Neko]

nvm just tag or pm me if you have any questions i got off early fish sticks cat

Implemented :3

 

[DC]

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AC = Add Comma, RC = Remove Comma, AH = Add Hyphen, RH = Remove Hyphen

Dnite

Dragonite @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Multiscale
EVs: 112 HP / 144 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- Dragon Dance
- Roost

Dragonite's The combination of Multiscale, Dragon Dance, and Roost makes it Dragonite a threatening sweeper in the Electric, Fire, and Water matchups. Dragon Claw allows Dragonite to damage Pokemon such as Rotom-W and Pelipper,(RC) while also being able to switch moves.(Do we need to explain a STAB move?) Earthquake allows it to remove threatens Steel-, Electric-, and Poison-types such as Aegislash, Tapu Koko, and Toxapex. The combination of Dragon Dance and Roost allows Dragonite to set up multiple times on Pokemon that rely on chip damage to deal with Dragonite it, such as Rotom-W, while also maximizing the utility of Multiscale. 252 Speed EVs with a Jolly nature allows Dragonite to outpace and remove threats such as Tapu Koko, Dragapult, and Zeraora after a Dragon Dance,(similarly, do we need to explain maximum investment?) while 144 Attack EVs allows let Dragonite to OHKO SubRoost Kyurem with +1 Dragon Claw after a Dragon Dance. Dragonite is unable to check defensive Pokemon such as Skarmory and Slowbro,(AC) so special attackers like Thundurus-T and Galarian Moltres make great teammates to handle them. Furthermore,(RC) Pokemon like Celesteela and Corviknight are appreciated to check Fairy-types such as Tapu Bulu and Tapu Fini.
- There is a lot of repetition of "allows", so I am gonna change some of them.
Here is a replay of Dragonite showing off its bulky prowess to eventually win the Electric matchup:(add colon) [Gen 8] Monotype: Dieu Amphibien vs. RindaOkami

GP 1/1

 

[Neko]

Do we need to explain a STAB move?

I'll leave it in because Dnite is Electric team breaker I think. The switching moves thing feels kinda needed because Outrage can be taken advantage of by Koko, etc.

similarly, do we need to explain maximum investment?

Removed, thank you :D (Added back the "after a dragon dance" since the first mention of it was removed ...)

The checks have been implemented, thank you!

 

[Eisenherz]