Plus
Wyverii
DougJustDoug
Wyverii
DougJustDoug
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CAP 4 CAP 4 - Part 14 (Pokedex Entry Poll 2)
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DougJustDoug(Great and Make Sence)
Lunar Fang(Make Sence)
Plus(Also Makes Sence)
Lunar Fang(Make Sence)
Plus(Also Makes Sence)
Lunar Fang
Plus
Mr. Happy
Plus
Mr. Happy
Plus
Kamikaze Korean
Beej
Kamikaze Korean
Beej
Plus
Tsukikage
Kamikaze Korean
Tsukikage
Kamikaze Korean
Plus
Beej
Kamikaze Korean
Beej
Kamikaze Korean
Beej - I still love mine, as cocky as that sounds.
Wyverii - This is really a great one, love how it talks about the hands and the winds.
DougJustDoug - For this last one I had a really hard time deciding between Doug and Lunar Fang, but in the end I think the drill is way too important a factor to leave out.
Wyverii - This is really a great one, love how it talks about the hands and the winds.
DougJustDoug - For this last one I had a really hard time deciding between Doug and Lunar Fang, but in the end I think the drill is way too important a factor to leave out.
Lunar Fang -
Plus -
Wyverii -
Plus -
Wyverii -
Mr. Happy
Lunar Fang
Plus
Lunar Fang
Plus
Results!
Plus - 31
Kamikaze Korean - 15
Tsukikage - 9
Beej - 13
DougJustDoug - 12
Plus - 31
Lunar Fang - 18
Mr. Happy - 16
Wyverii - 15
Kamikaze Korean - 15
Tsukikage - 9
Beej - 13
DougJustDoug - 12
CAP 4 is done?
"A FIDGIT's brain is capable of focusing on eight different actions perfectly, using each of its hands for a separate action."
FIDGIT'S -> FIDGIT's (only the name itself is capitalized)
it's -> its (grammar)
seperate -> separate (spelling)
"The jewels on FIDGIT's hands are capable of sucking poison from the bodies of its afflicted allies. Some are even used in Pokémon Centers during extreme cases of poisoning."
" The -> "The (removed errant space)
Fidgit's -> FIDGIT's (That's how we do it on Smogon.)
their -> its
Pokemon -> Pokémon
"FIDGIT is extremely curious and stubborn. Whenever a FIDGIT sees a human doing any kind of manual work, it immediately begins imitating what it sees until it has bested the human."
Fidgit -> a FIDGIT (makes more sense)
he -> it (MegaMewtwo pointed this out.)
will immediately imitate -> immediately begins imitating (proper grammar, makes more sense)
it -> what it sees ("it" has been used too many times, and "the human" would sound awkward because it is used again at the end of the sentence)
no period at the end -> period at the end
FIDGIT'S -> FIDGIT's (only the name itself is capitalized)
it's -> its (grammar)
seperate -> separate (spelling)
"The jewels on FIDGIT's hands are capable of sucking poison from the bodies of its afflicted allies. Some are even used in Pokémon Centers during extreme cases of poisoning."
" The -> "The (removed errant space)
Fidgit's -> FIDGIT's (That's how we do it on Smogon.)
their -> its
Pokemon -> Pokémon
"FIDGIT is extremely curious and stubborn. Whenever a FIDGIT sees a human doing any kind of manual work, it immediately begins imitating what it sees until it has bested the human."
Fidgit -> a FIDGIT (makes more sense)
he -> it (MegaMewtwo pointed this out.)
will immediately imitate -> immediately begins imitating (proper grammar, makes more sense)
it -> what it sees ("it" has been used too many times, and "the human" would sound awkward because it is used again at the end of the sentence)
no period at the end -> period at the end
Thanks, ParadOxymoron. My entry looks much better that way :D
I suppose mine would be the Platinum entry?
I suppose mine would be the Platinum entry?
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