Bisharp [QC: 0/3]

[Curlia]

Overview
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• Great ability as in Defiant which discourages intimidate.
• It checks threats in battle spot such as Gengar, Aegislash, Sylveon, and Cresselia.
• One of the other big things it gets is priority sucker punch.
• able to check trick room with its priority sucker punch.
• Only has 70 speed.
• You have to play mind games with sucker punch.


Set up sweeper
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name: Set up sweeper
move 1:Swords Dance
move 2:Knock Off
move 3:Sucker Punch
move 4:Iron Head
ability:Defiant
item:Life Orb/focus sash
evs: 4 HP/ 252 Atk./ 252 spe
nature:Jolly

Moves
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• Swords dance allows bisharp to set up and sweep.
• Sucker punch is a big move for bisharp as it's a pretty powerful move and it has priority.
• knock off is there to hit slower pokemon for more damage.
• Knock off is important for knocking off a eviolite or a important item for the opponent.

Set Details
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• Max attack and Max speed is used to max out bisharp's sweeping complicity.
• Jolly is used to make Bisharp as fast as possible as its already getting extra power from Swords dance and possibly Life Orb.
• Focus sash also makes it easier to set up, especially against things like sacred sword aegislash.

Usage Tips
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• Bisharp is a sweeper so you will need to get rid of faster fighting pokemon or mach punchers. • Such as Conkelder who can just mach punch and pick up a kill if you are not focus sash.
• Also don't use sucker punch on pokemon who are obviously going for will-o-wisp or something that will cause sucker punch to fail.

Team Options
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• Things that life cresselia gone work really well with bisharp.
• mega Salamence is a good partner as it can hit the fighting types with a super effective Aerilate move.
• Gengar is also a good partner as it can deal with fighting and ground types, also giving out burns to things like landorus-t and other checks to bisharp.
• Basically anything that takes care of bisharp checks and dislikes things walls like sylveon. • • • Cresselia also makes a good partner as it can switch directly into fighting and ground types and ice beam/psychic. It also supports bisharp by t-waving and slowing fast pokes down for bisharp to come and sweep later.

Checks & Counters
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Ground types, such as garchomp, can come and earthquake. Fighting types, such as conkeldur, lucario, and blaziken, can come in freely to set up and kill bisharp. Bulky annoying waters, such as suicune, can come in and scald burn making them really hard to take down. Fire types, such as the mega charizards, get a free switch in to check pretty freely. Klefki checks both of bishops stabs and can thunder wave comfortably.

Shout out to ethan06 for being a awesome staff and helping me out!

 

[skies]

cinccino for ubers: Hey there man! There are a few errors in this. Primarily, this has to be in a bullet format until it receives two QC checks, not right as posting it. For example, you would put it like:

• Great ability in Defiant, which dissuades Intimidate.
• Checks many popular threats such as x, y, and z.

I'd also recommend checking out this thread: http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/writing-battle-spot-analyses-required-reading.3533705/. If you have further questions, feel free to PM me! :]

 

[cant say]

cinccino for ubers

This is not ready for QC. There is a lot of information missing and there isn't even an 'Other Options' section. I've looked through your post history and found that you've tried to write analyses in several other forums which have all been reassigned, and you have just moved from forum-to-forum. You've blatantly ignored the rules set out in the reservations thread (ie: reserving two at once, and reserving another before your first has reached the written stage) and have been much too hasty in trying to lock in Rotom-H. I urge you to lurk the forums some more, learn how things work around here, improve your writing skills, and come back when you feel you are ready. That being said;

Rejected 1/3

 

[DragonWhale]

I have to agree with cant say here. It doesn't look like you put a lot of time into this, and the different font in the overview makes it look like you just copy-pasted those notes from somewhere else. Having you rush through these analyses will make the work of those in QC and GP harder than it should be (Capitalization is all over the place, missing a section, etc) and having you reserve the next Pokemon (already) to do the same thing all over again will not be good for Battle Spot C&C as a whole. Relax, take your time, and aim for quality over quantity. Once you reserve a Pokemon it's all yours.

Rejected 2/3

 

[Jibaku]

Going to have to bandwagon and QC Reject 3/3 here. The set is correct for the most part (where's Adamant??), but the information feels incredibly rushed. There's simply not enough information and only the absolute basics were covered. Your overview contained only the bare minimum of Bisharp's qualities and weaknesses, for example (why is Bisharp's unique typing not mentioned? Where are his stat strengths and weaknesses?). You're missing other options too, in which Bisharp has a number of alternative moves to choose from such as Thunder Wave, Pursuit, Stealth Rock, Metal Burst, and Low Kick. Also, some of your checks are just wrong. Charizard doesn't come in freely - it gets chunked by Knock Off and can't take a SD Sucker Punch. Suicune won't like SDed Knock Offs, and Klefki dies to Iron Head. Now there are more errors but I'm not giving you all the answers but I am sure you'll be able to get things done correctly if you took time working on it :)