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I like the sketchy style you use on your nuzlocke and the last post, but there's something about her eyes and legs that makes it seem weird...maybe that's just valentine's day...mine was weird too :p
You wouldn't mind colouring it in sometime in the future, right?
Chapter 8 was short but sweet. Your action panels are amazing... i've said this before, but your nuzlocke comic is comparable to a manga... for me at least :]
ps this post is really to say that my scribbling from now on is going to be at http://azbot.tumblr.com/, azlocke included, so if you have an interest in that then that's where to look