Need Feedback on poor team :(

Please help, ive tried planning this as a team but I need some feedback from ppl who kno what they are doing.

Iraq Lobster (Buzzwole) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 252 Atk / 40 Def / 216 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Thunder Punch
- Fell Stinger
- Hammer Arm
- Stone Edge
Frenemy (Toxapex) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 Def / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Bold Nature
- Wide Guard
- Scald
- Toxic Spikes
- Baneful Bunker
Nailblaze (Talonflame) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Gale Wings
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Flare Blitz
- Tailwind
- Quick Guard
- Brave Bird
Tidehunter (Dhelmise) @ Leftovers
Ability: Steelworker
EVs: 252 Atk / 180 Def / 76 SpD
Brave Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Shadow Claw
- Power Whip
- Rapid Spin
- Gyro Ball
Macintosh (Mudsdale) (M) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Stamina
EVs: 100 HP / 224 Atk / 184 SpD
Calm Nature
- Rock Slide
- High Horsepower
- Close Combat
- Heavy Slam
Visolute (Vikavolt) (M) @ Choice Specs
Ability: Levitate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Bug Buzz
- Thunderbolt
- Flash Cannon
- Volt Switch
 
Please help, ive tried planning this as a team but I need some feedback from ppl who kno what they are doing.

Iraq Lobster (Buzzwole) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 252 Atk / 40 Def / 216 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Thunder Punch
- Fell Stinger
- Hammer Arm
- Stone Edge
Frenemy (Toxapex) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 Def / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Bold Nature
- Wide Guard
- Scald
- Toxic Spikes
- Baneful Bunker
Nailblaze (Talonflame) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Gale Wings
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Flare Blitz
- Tailwind
- Quick Guard
- Brave Bird
Tidehunter (Dhelmise) @ Leftovers
Ability: Steelworker
EVs: 252 Atk / 180 Def / 76 SpD
Brave Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Shadow Claw
- Power Whip
- Rapid Spin
- Gyro Ball
Macintosh (Mudsdale) (M) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Stamina
EVs: 100 HP / 224 Atk / 184 SpD
Calm Nature
- Rock Slide
- High Horsepower
- Close Combat
- Heavy Slam
Visolute (Vikavolt) (M) @ Choice Specs
Ability: Levitate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Bug Buzz
- Thunderbolt
- Flash Cannon
- Volt Switch
Hi, you need to fill out the mandatory team building homework assignment before you can post here.
 
God dammit every time I try and just get some simple feedback tht I desperately need, someone tells me I cant for some ridicoulous reason!

Tell me why I have to waste my time giving myself more random homework on a forum discussion thread, where I just want some feedback!?!?
 
You know what
screw it!!!!

I just wanted to get some help and this whole site has got backward logic and sound like computers!

I give up :,(




I wanted to make just 1 team tht was good online and thought this was the best place to come for help, but no!!!!!!!

Thanks smogon for crushing my dreams of becoming a better pokemon player with ur toxic rules and no humanity kindness to help others
 
You know what
screw it!!!!

I just wanted to get some help and this whole site has got backward logic and sound like computers!

I give up :,(




I wanted to make just 1 team tht was good online and thought this was the best place to come for help, but no!!!!!!!

Thanks smogon for crushing my dreams of becoming a better pokemon player with ur toxic rules and no humanity kindness to help others
I am very sorry you feel that way, but rules are rules, I don't make them, if you change your mind, we will be glad to help you after you finish the assignment.

And, as far as I know the assignment is designed to prevent people who are not vested in learning, have absolutely no understanding of the format, or can help themselves from posting here.
 
Hey, there's a Pokemon VGC Group on Facebook that may help but there are a lot of members so don't be surprised if your post isn't seen. I am also willing to give feedback with my knowledge (keep in mind that I am a new player as well) on Twitter or any other social media with a PM feature since I don't check Smogon that often.
 
Please work on formatting and descriptions, I have no idea what these EVs are needed and for what


  • This team is almost all offense, absolutely nothing carries Protect except Toxepex
  • Mudsdale's nature is completely wrong, Calm reduces attack in favor of SpD, unless you meant to write Careful and confused the two
  • Dhlemise should not be running Rapid Spin, VGC is too fast paced for hazards to be present in the meta
  • Toxipex is not good in VGC, Tapu Fini completely walls it, it's also a bulky Pokemon so Focus Sash is not a good item for it
  • Your team is composed of very slow Pokemon but no Trick Room, way too slow to use Tailwind too

Overrall no synergy, needs to be scrapped
 
You know what
screw it!!!!

I just wanted to get some help and this whole site has got backward logic and sound like computers!

I give up :,(




I wanted to make just 1 team tht was good online and thought this was the best place to come for help, but no!!!!!!!

Thanks smogon for crushing my dreams of becoming a better pokemon player with ur toxic rules and no humanity kindness to help others
NEVER GIVE UP!!!!!
 

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