OU Choice Band Dracovish [QC: 1/1] [GP: 1/1]

[Milak]

Dracovish @ Choice Band
Ability: Strong Jaw
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Fishious Rend
- Crunch
- Psychic Fangs
- Outrage

Choice Band Dracovish is an extremely powerful wallbreaker in OU thanks to Fishious Rend, which doubles in power when it hits first and is boosted by Strong Jaw, meaning it can heavily damage even Water-resistant foes such as Toxapex and Ferrothorn on the switch. Crunch is used to hit the uncommon Jellicent, whereas Psychic Fangs provides better coverage for Toxapex and Kommo-o. Outrage takes care of Seismitoad and Gastrodon, which are immune to Fishious Rend thanks to their abilities and can tank its coverage options relatively well. Teammates like Ferrothorn, Kyurem, Clefable, and Conkeldurr can deal with the aforementioned Water-immune foes. Corviknight, Dragapult, and Clefable provide pivot support with U-turn and Teleport, respectively, allowing Dracovish to keep high offensive pressure. Dragapult and Zeraora can mitigate Dracovish's mediocre Speed by dealing with faster threats like Hydreigon and Kyurem. Zeraora in particular offers great support, as they can both weaken each other's checks.

 

[Milak]

This is ready for QC!

 

[curiosity]

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Dracovish @ Choice Band
Ability: Strong Jaw
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Fishious Rend
- Crunch
- Psychic Fangs
- Outrage

Choice Band Dracovish is an extremely powerful wallbreaker in OU. given that the fb audience is... less than informed, it's definitely worth elaborating on this; you could probably talk about rend then combine it with the next line? Just food for thought. Fishious Rend is its main STAB move and can heavily damage even Water-resistant foes such as Toxapex and Ferrothorn on the switch. Crunch is used to OHKO Dragapult pult is already ohko'd on the switch and you're not staying in and clicking crunch since that sounds bloody insane; remove this mention altogether since really it's only there for jelli. and hit the unusual Jellicent, whereas Psychic Fangs provides better coverage for Toxapex and Kommo-o. Outrage is its secondary STAB move and takes care of Seismitoad and Gastrodon, which are immune to Fishious Rend thanks to their abilities and can tank its coverage options relatively well. Teammates like Ferrothorn, Kyurem, Clefable, and Dragapult I feel like there are much better examples of stuff that pressure fat waters than pult; perhaps mention something like conk instead? can deal with the aforementioned Water-immune foes, with the latter two providing pivot support with Teleport and U-turn, respectively, allowing Dracovish to keep high offensive pressure. Dragapult and Zeraora are great partners that can mitigate Dracovish's mediocre Speed by dealing with faster threats like Hydreigon and Kyurem. If you're going to bring up zeraora there should at least be mentions of them wearing down each shared checks. However, Sticky Web support from Ribombee can be considered to slow down the opposition, letting Dracovish wallbreak more easily. Not a fan of this mention here since you're never really running cb vish on webs, so you can probably remove this altogether and expand upon the previous mention.

Great work! QC 1/1

 

[Milak]

Did, moved to GP.

 

[Astra]

add remove (comments)

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Dracovish @ Choice Band
Ability: Strong Jaw
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Fishious Rend
- Crunch
- Psychic Fangs
- Outrage

Choice Band Dracovish is an extremely powerful wallbreaker in OU thanks to its main STAB move (not really needed for a spotlight plus helps get closer to the 1000 character soft limit) Fishious Rend, which doubles its in power when it hits first and is boosted by Strong Jaw, meaning it can heavily damage even Water-resistant foes such as Toxapex and Ferrothorn on the switch. Crunch is used to hit the unusual uncommon (i'm assuming this is what you mean? unusual just feels like, well, an unusual adjective to use) Jellicent, whereas Psychic Fangs provides better coverage for Toxapex and Kommo-o. Outrage is its secondary STAB move and (same thing) takes care of Seismitoad and Gastrodon, which are immune to Fishious Rend thanks to their abilities and can tank its coverage options relatively well. Teammates like Ferrothorn, Kyurem, Clefable, and Conkeldurr can deal with the aforementioned Water-immune foes. Corviknight, Dragapult, and Clefable provide pivot support with U-turn and Teleport, respectively, allowing Dracovish to keep high offensive pressure. Dragapult and Zeraora can mitigate Dracovish's mediocre Speed by dealing with faster threats like Hydreigon and Kyurem. Zeraora in particular offers great support, as they can both weaken each other's checks.

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[Milak]

Implemented, this is now done

 

[Eisenherz]