You're golden for that first revision; I forgot that hail did chip, so I thought you were only mentioning it because it makes Blizzard 100% accurate.
Regarding the second change, I goofed. "a much more" is supposed to be blue. There's nothing wrong with your idea, though.
Regarding the second change, I goofed. "a much more" is supposed to be blue. There's nothing wrong with your idea, though.